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Really loved the game. We don't have something like this in India. It was really fun, but just when I was starting to enjoy it, it started to become bugging.
The scoring system is all wrong, you should get more points at a higher level rather than a small increase. Also, the pictures were all the same ones(Although its good to have a small number of pictures for file size) Increasing the level of difficulty by means other than(but also including) time limit might make it tougher and also playable to higher levels.
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""You geek!"(Just a quote from the movie...)"
Hahaha. Loved it when their senseless bickering turned out into something much more! I did not really get the Lead Iodide part, but loved it when he went Lead(II)! Iodide. Its an interesting original fight mix that could have ended slightly better, but the content was good.
On the other hand, the sound was loud and soft at places, maybe you want the viewer to turn the sound up and down, but keeping it at a shorter range is more comfortable. Also, the part where the two are fighting as one color blurs could have been done better. And even though I liked the Art Scholar, he could have played a slightly bigger part in the end or something.
Still, overall, this is a very good production, and it reminds me of school. Please reply.
Author's Response:
Well, I think Lead(I) Idodide is yellow & Lead(II) r red colour.
So I make em, sry if I was wrong tho.
Yea, my speaker kinda soft, so it got no prob wif small speaker viewer.
Thx for the review & here's the reply, lol
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Well, its great! especially since it does not stick to the track. That makes it a bit more realistic...ok, not realistic, but fun! A custom editor is a great addition to any game and the ability to create your own levels is always a great addition. Maybe different coins for different difficulties. Also maybe different modes of play. Like time attack, where you have to create coster after coster for some time. And each attempt must be successful, or something like that. Maybe a story mode? The game is a bit too simple right now, but it could be improved. Looking forward to the sequel!
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One of those animations that play with your emotions. Loved your style and the little robot. I was slightly upset about the cat, but i guess 'The Scientist' can fix him ;). Good way to end it, as it clears suspicions about the characters. Thought the pulling of the lever 'gag' was good fun.
The only thing I missed was whether the robot had a mind of its own and was partially controlled by the scientist, or whether the scientist was completely in control of it. Although it makes no difference, I really wished to know.
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This was very good. The starting classroom scene was well planned out. So was the whole story.
There was that part of the door, in which he was partly out and partly in, where it did not look good, but the overall animation covered that up. Maybe making the character solid next time might be better, or was that your idea to have only lines without colour? It was also slightly choppy here and there, but with such a long project, you just cant complain. 9.8/10
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I hate to say it, but this kind of thing has been done before...a lot! So I cant give you points for creativity if you dont follow up with something better. The graphics of the equipment could be better, like when the pod opened up. So dont become smug just yet. And I hope you've noticed the song doesn't coincide with whats happening in the movie.
On the brighter side, you have a good style, and adding detail to certain objects might help. This story is going somewhere. And hope its part of a series(that way, it will be original).
Author's Response:
Hey thanks for the review... I'm not sure if you've actually seen any similar plot before but as far as i know, it's all outta my head... though a little bit of inspiration does come from cloning and stem-cell research... And no this isn't going to be part of any series... It's a simple music video... When the song ends, so does this movie. And as far as the whole song/movie sync goes... It's all there... just listen closely to the lyrics :)
I'll definitely try to make something better in the future... Maybe not up to your standards but nevertheless something better ;) Thanks again.
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Really good style you have there. Cant wait till this is finished. But please do finish it, many authors lose interest after a while.
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What makes this game good is that you are so into the simplicity of the game while trying to hit the apple, you think that the gameover graphics wont be too good. But then you are surprised! I liked the variety of the ways the guy can die depending on where you hit him(I wonder how many there are. I found about 5). Thats what many games lack. The graphics are good too. Its simple shading, but effective for this game. Even the file size is good.
Bringing out a variety of characters to choose from by either preset or dress-up might be what people are looking for. But that might result in increased file size.
Wating for your reply.
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Well, the graphics were great. The thing is, i almost saw that ending coming. A little longer next time maybe? When the flash started, i thought it had a good story, but then when it reached the climax(their two shadows) I thought it would be a much greater battle.
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I really dont know why, but you are one of the most original people that i have seen on this site.
It was very well done, jokes 'I' havent heard anyway, but seriously, very well done, making sure everyone got the last one was also a nice idea.
Please continue to make good animations.
Waiting for your next creation,
RW
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